My Targets
• As we have recently been undertaking some peer to peer assessments with the class I will be reviewing them and identifying how to take the www’s and ebi’s in order to make it better.
• Another target of mine is to sort out my footnotes as they I have done them incorrectly in terms of where the footnotes should be.
• Another target is to conduct a full investigation into Stuart Hall and his theories about the black representation as well as discussion of colonialism/post colonialism and how it links with representation.
• I will also need to use more media theories and re-structure some of my sentences.
• When using wider contexts I will need to use political as well.
• An additional target for me is to bring in moral panics and direct links to ownership and control.
• My 7th target is to relate my points that I make to different theories or to include theories after each point in order to back up my point and hopefully get a better grade.
My next steps
• My next step is to start with each target that I have set myself and make all the necessary changes I will need to do in order to get my grade higher. I will be starting the first four targets tonight which will leave me with the last three on Saturday the 20th of March.
• Once I have made all the changes that I need to do, I will be reading it thoroughly to myself to see if I have covered all the points needed. This will be done on Saturday the 20th also.
• Once I have read it myself I will be showing it to a family member so that they can see it for them to see if I have done any errors in terms of the grammars etc.
• Before the deadline for the second draft is due I will be showing my essay to a classmate to see if they could see any faults in my essay and asking them advice in terms of how could I improve my essay.
• I will also be getting much more research on my chosen topic. I will be using more books from the Ealing library which will enable me to boost my bibliography.
Friday 19 March 2010
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