Even Better If ..

After growing some feedback on the positive points about our presentation, we received clear feedback on how we could have improved our pitch/or even better if. We were told that within certain slides of the presentation, there wasn’t enough information shown on certain categories and that a little more media terminology should have been used whilst trying to sell out production idea.

• Within some slides, the order could have been changed around to make the order a little more understanding.
• Some extra research needed into the documentary genre.
• More information on the main conventions.
• Some audience theories should have been fully explained.
• A little more information about the voiceovers.
• Discuss institution sources and public service broadcasters.

In Conclusion ..

Getting all this feedback from our teacher and the class, we were able to understand our weakness and learn how to better improve them. Of course it was also good getting positive feedback from the teacher and the class as we were able to identify our strong points as well as our weak points.
After this, we are now more aware of what we are suppose to do, and what our next steps are suppose to be whilst planning to shoot and edit our production. We have a better insight of the kind of research we should be doing and where to possible find the best sources for the best research.